Comments on: Modifiers http://wrecking.org/cbd/2006/07/31/modifiers/ Software studies, technical communication, writing studies, web accessibility, and new media. Life with my girls. Tue, 07 Oct 2008 14:45:40 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.2 By: cbd http://wrecking.org/cbd/2006/07/31/modifiers/#comment-2306 cbd Wed, 02 Aug 2006 17:50:08 +0000 http://wrecking.org/cbd/?p=193#comment-2306 I'd prefer "as a rookie" be at the start of the sentence. The second example isn't much better in context (a Flash ad). I’d prefer “as a rookie” be at the start of the sentence.

The second example isn’t much better in context (a Flash ad).

]]> By: erich http://wrecking.org/cbd/2006/07/31/modifiers/#comment-2305 erich Wed, 02 Aug 2006 16:53:13 +0000 http://wrecking.org/cbd/?p=193#comment-2305 I actually don't see any problem with the first example. The second, though, is practically unintelligible. Especially out of context, it's damn near impossible for me to parse. I actually don’t see any problem with the first example. The second, though, is practically unintelligible. Especially out of context, it’s damn near impossible for me to parse.

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